Tuesday, 3 January 2017

Reaction to our first draft

We got a student from our class to react to our first draft. We then asked him a few questions so we could get an idea on what we need to improve on. His response was helpful, we knew that some points of the film did well but others made him laugh which isn't what we are really aiming for in our film. When asking questions we got some interesting points and what our viewers expect from a film in our genre. We will definitely follow his points and I we will improve and get another reaction out of him.

Our first draft and what needs to be improved